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I've hoped,
I've tried,
I've screamed,
And cried,
I've loved,
And hated,
I've chopped,
And grated,
I've burnt,
And I've cried some more,
But your apologies came to late,
To end this feeling of hate,
That tears at my soul and knocks at my gate,
That stares me in the eye and holds my fate.
©2009-2010 ~Breemu
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The feeling of hate.

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:iconiatsath:
What a wonderful depiction of the complex emotion that is hate. The pace to this feels quite hurried, which personally, I find suggests the tumbling emotions. Anyways, aside from that brief moment of insight, great poem. :)

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Thank you. I wasn't sure if people would understand I was describing the feeling, not telling a story. Obviously you did. (:

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:iconiatsath:
:) No probs, dude.

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